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Pin: Friends Are There To Tell You Stuff You Don't Notice

Title: Friends Are There to Tell You Stuff You Don’t Notice
Genre: General/Humor
Pairing: Pin friendship; but they do joke about the other kind of relationship.
Rating: PG-13 for Yamapi’s use of the word “ass”
Word Count: 187
Summary: Jin has always had the habit of wearing loose low-waist pants.



Mary's father has five daughters: Nana, Nene, Nini, Nono… What's the name of the fifth daughter?

“And Yuu was like, 'I dunno, Nunu?' I can't believe him!” Jin paused to laugh, "And they call me stupid, seriously.” Jin sipped on his drink.

“He's too lazy to think, sometimes.” Yamapi laughed. He was about to sip on his drink when, suddenly, he caught sight of Jin's exposed back, underwear and...

“Sheesh, Jin.” He pulled Jin's shirt down. “I can see your ass.”

Jin has always had the habit of wearing loose low-waist pants. He straightened his body and attempted to pull his pants up. “You like seeing my ass,” he used a sarcastic tone and sighed. “This always happens.”

Yamapi removed his jacket. “Here, tie it on your waist. Or would you like me to do that for you?” He rolled his eyes.

“Pff,” Jin huffed and tied the jacket. “Don't make it so obvious that you have the hots for me.”

Both boys then laughed at each other.

“But seriously, you really need to wear long jackets, Jin.”

“Shut up,” he shoved Yamapi’s shoulder. “I will already.”


Please comment and give constructive criticsm C: and help me improve my writing skills! I want to be as great as some of my fic writing idols :D

Written on miruiki’s YM window, because I only write fics (in script mode!) on YM windows or random comments. takeoutfries where are you? :c

TASHHH CONTINUED THE FIIIICC *____* ILU TASHHHH!!
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FIRST!!! kgjldbfgbfldjkgdf
ahaha oke awesome im first 8DDDD OKI.

that was oki 8DDDD

wala naman akong nakita errors LOL~
fhasfhal thanks ches! ♥♥♥♥ hahahahah I ALWAYS WRITE FIC WHEN WITH YOU O: ♥♥♥

it's so short kaya >_<~

AND YOUR ICON. HAHAHA ALAM KO YUNG ORIGINAL. HAHAHAAHA
AHAHHA. kung titignan mo yung larger ver, makikita mo pa mukha ni tegoshi eh =))

pero madami nkong naloko jan =))))))))
wahahahh! PIN! :3
cute fic! XD

wahahaa.. NUNU! XD
write more write more! :3
*gives cookies*
thankksss lae 8D 8D! ♥♥♥♥

i'm writing one write now. I wrote a pin script last night sa cellphone O: with my other friend? (YES, sun cellular, 24/7 unlimitted. SAN KA PA?)

LOL :D ♥♥ thanks for the cookies! ♥
Aha, you *poke* making me like Pin recently~ 8D
It's really cute ♥ I like how you write already 83
I MADE YOU LIKE PIN? sfalhklshflahlshlsafas. yay yay yay yay!! ♥♥l

thank you sou-chan! ♥♥♥ :) i'm so happy that someone likes how I write. (but i want to write long!fic :c *frustruated and runs like how Jin ran during Rescue Making of* aah!)

thank you thank you thank you thank you thank you ♥♥♥♥♥
XD I've never been against it, but it's been right at the bottom of my list of priorities for a long while 83; you're making me re-appreciate the relationship XD

♥ I'm sure you could write a long fic ;o; you just.. do this then let Jin carry on XD I'd like to read it if you did~ [oh dont~ I threw my lunch up in the air the first time I saw that X3;]

♥♥♥♥ definitely write more >3< *poke*
:)) i've been looking for some PiN fics and now i found one!!! yatta!!! :))x))right more!!!:D
heehee! :D pin fan! ♥♥♥ thanks for reading and adding! :D

i might post another fic within the week (if i'm not lazy to write hahaha) :D ♥♥♥
yeap!!! i am a pin fan! :)) i really love them!!! ;)
it's okay if you're lazy to post another fic about them... i'm willing to wait for it.. :)) :D ;) :>
So cute.
I love their friendship.

Thanks for sharing.
thanks hanny-chan! ♥♥♥ :)

i love their.. relationship too *_* it's just too dorky!
IMPROVEMENT! SUUUUPER. I LIKE.

As in 'yung flow ng words, natural lang, easy conversation style. Me approves. :D
OMG TASH. NAIIYAK AKO. THANK YOU SO MUCH THAT YOU APPROVE. THIS IS NOW LIKE MY MOST FAVORITE FIC EVER BY ME.

Kanina before posting I was like "TAAAAAAAAASSH ASAN KAAAA" sa YM stat ko. O: i wanted you to see first. PERO ANG TAGAL MO. nauna si Ches. so then, i posted O: and i'm like "NAKO.. O: i'm so nervous!"

i was such a nervous wreck! I've had a lot of trouble writing this. Should I use this word or that word? O: masyado atang OA or idk.

YOU DON'T KNOW HOW HAPPY I AM WITH YOU APPROVING MY FIC *___* you're like one of my fic idols. FOREALZ, YO.

HERE, HAVE MY KISS ME ICON. *___*
Stop flattering me, you dork. STOP MAKING ME FEEL TOUCHED.

PERO ANG TAGAL MO.
Queen of procrastination, bb. Late sa lahat nang bagay.

Anyway, comment!fic just because.

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The next day, Yamapi choked on his chocolate bar when Jin came walking into NEWS' dressing room.

"Just--what is that?"

Jin pulled on his left sleeve, which was practically slipping off his shoulders, practically leaving a hint of bare--shirt? And then there was another shirt inside said shirt and another--Yamapi couldn't count anymore.

And they weren't just shirts--they were long shirts that extended way past Jin's thighs, like a girl's fitted blouse, although apparently, Jin liked wearing his girly blouses in layers. No, make that thick layers, three, four, five shirts--and it was summer. Jin was crazy.

He would even like to point out the itchy-and-uncomfortable-looking scarf that hung around Jin's neck like a cobweb and the sweat-inviting jacket that was tied around Jin's waist but decided against it.

"So this is fat!Jin's new method to lose weight," Ryo pointedly remarked before turning back to his guitar. "Losing bright ideas?"

Jin was about to mutter some unwitty comeback when Yamapi chimed in with, "Conservative much, Bakanishi? All I told you was to keep your crook in private, you know? What's with the unnecessary amount of clothing?"

"Obviously, I still believe you have the hots for me, Pi," Jin grinned into his scarf. "You're making me shed off my clothes by using... implications."

Yamapi licked off the last of his chocolate from the wrapper before waving a hand, "Oh, puhlease. Don't start getting the wrong idea. I'm just concerned." Then he paused, before adding, "And don't use words you don't even understand."

"Whatever, Yamashita, you're just in denial--and for the record, I do know what 'implication' means!"

Ryo could be heard coughing over a sheet of lyrics about people refusing to just getting it on and over with.

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I am an italics whore, I swear. Also, forgive my corniness. I am brain-drained at 2:30 in the morning.
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DIDN'T READ COMMENT!FIC YET DFLHSLAFHSLAKHALSHSFLHAFL BECAUSEEE OMGGG



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(KEYBOARDSMASHING IS SO EASY IN THIS LAPTOP... HAHHAHAHA OMGGGGGGGG)

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ilu tash!!! ILU SO MUCH 2 U!!!!!!! PAAAAAAAAN ♥♥♥♥♥
OH TASSSSH ♥♥♥♥ I LOVEEEEE ITTTT.. (WELL I LOVE EVERY JIN FIC YOU WRITE AS A DEFAULT)

fk;alsjflasjfl AND RYO'S LIFE IS SO HARD. I ABSOLUTELY LOVE THEIR FRIENDSHIP as much as how I love their friendship with Shirota Yuu~ :Db I kind of wanted Ryo to be in my fic as te one saying Nunu BUT NOOO Ryo has too much pride in him. XDD

and i don't understand why you think your writing is degrading O: I think it's just fine; your writing style is just.. changing? Well, either way, you're still a great writer and is worthy enough of being called on of my idols! (and me, saying that to a close friend, I HAVE PRIDE TOO! *gets shot*)

I wish i could write like you (and not just my pathetic ficscripts) and learn how to use italics in the proper places. AND ONE OF MY MOT FAVORITE PUNCTUATION: ; <-- the like this one. it's name escapes me. O: i just woke up. hahah and i haven't eate---... semi-colon 8D (OMG. TUTULDOK? ay... Tuldok-kuwit!)

Oh and sorr for leaving you last night :c My dad caught me O: "HOY BA'T GISING KA PA?" ... you know the drill.
me: erm. NO i'm actually asleep upstairs! You're just dreaming! O:

... for the record, i did NOT say that to my dad's face. I don't have enough balls to do it. hahahaha I wanna learn gangstah language for the lulz.

oh and tash! :D thank you for everything *_____* 'd quote the whole comment fic at you, but this comment (ONCE AGAIN) is quite LONG. OH HECK.

Jin pulled on his left sleeve, which was practically slipping off his shoulders, practically leaving a hint of bare--shirt? And then there was another shirt inside said shirt and another--Yamapi couldn't count anymore.
YAMAPI is checking out Jin, i can tell. HAHAHA, he wants to have his piece of bare... shoulder.

they were long shirts that extended way past Jin's thighs, like a girl's fitted blouse
UEDA WEARS THEM TOO!!! Oh! and when Jin performed Lovejuice in music station.. HE LOOKED LIKE.... a girl O:

"So this is fat!Jin's new method to lose weight," Ryo pointedly remarked before turning back to his guitar. "Losing bright ideas?"
OH RYO, YOUR SNARK. I CAN NEVER GET ENOUGH OF IT.

"Obviously, I still believe you have the hots for me, Pi," Jin grinned into his scarf. "You're making me shed off my clothes by using... implications."
LOL! I LOVE THAT YOU STILL MADE THEM MAKE FUN OF EACH OTHER'S RELATIONSHIP. HERE HAVE MY HEART. it's PINK, okay? HHAHAH

"And don't use words you don't even understand."
WHERE HAVE I READ THIS BEFORE? ... some of your unfinished fics, maybe? hahaha! :D :D ♥♥ Yamapi misses feeling smart around Bakanishi. LOL

Ryo could be heard coughing over a sheet of lyrics about people refusing to just getting it on and over with.
sakfhashfakjfhlakhf RYOOOO. jkshdlhdfkHFLKFHAKJF. ♥♥♥

THAT'S IT. I HAVE SPOKEN.
yeah think? XDDD

dami mong nasabi OMMG did you just comment on every sentence tash type in? XDDD kidding. XD

pero I can't blame u gsdbngjjdlf tash is LOOOVE c:
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW LQ?! XDDD BWAHAHHAA.

ang picky picky naman ni Jin. not to mention he takes thing to seriously to the point of making it OA.

ang galing ni taaaash *glomp*